I received this in a bag of goodies at last year’s
“Publisher’s Showcase” event at the State Library of Victoria. I read the other
two, Divergent and Shatter Me, very quickly and, to
be honest, forgot about this one until recently. Once I started reading, I was
sorry it had taken so long.
In the distant future, two generation ships, Empyrian and New Horizon, have left a dying Earth to start a colony on a distant planet, New
Earth. Empyrian has a second
generation, after both ships experienced fertility problems for reasons not
explained in this volume – perhaps the next will tell us. New Horizon not only didn’t overcome its problems but the crew
have been convinced that the women’s ovaries have been ruined by incorrect
advice from Empyrian. This is
important, because it forms the basis of most of the plot, as New
Horizon, a light year ahead, slows down
till Empyrian can catch up and
then attacks in a raid which nets all the girls while leaving dead and dying
adults on Empyrian and a group of
boys from sixteen down to baby to cope as best they can.
Young lovers Kieran and Waverly are torn apart. Both of them
have to become leaders, Waverly to try to escape and Kieran to keep the damaged
Empyrian going.
The novel is a good, fast-paced action adventure which
rarely slows down and then only so that Waverly or Kieran can work out what’s
going on. It’s well-written in the old show-don’t-tell style – for example, we
learn about the layout and food-producing gardens of Empyrian as Kieran rushes off to make it in time for an
appointment with the captain; as he runs, we find out what he passes on the
way. The author never stops the action to describe a character; they do get
described, but not as a frozen picture or even the irritating, “She ran her
hand through her long, golden hair”.
The characters are strong and intelligent. At one point, Waverly
uses her knowledge of the physics she studied at school to work out that she
and the other girls have been lied to.
There’s a nice twist at the end which girls reading it may not like, but
I did. In any case, it’s a cliff-hanger, so twists are bound to occur.
There were just a few jarring notes. Given how carefully the author researched her physics, I wondered why there was no delay in
conversations between ships – even when they were a light year apart. There’s a
scene in which Waverly is shown a video of a discussion between the two ships’
leaders, with no delay whatever between them. Now, I know this happens all the
time in Star Trek and Babylon
5, but that’s TV. At the very least, it
might have been a good idea for the author to say something in an afterword.
It might also have been better to say that something
dramatic happened to the frozen embryos being carried than to assume they
weren’t carrying any. These are ships going to found a new world – even if
something happened to the crew’s fertility along the way, one would think that
no chances would be taken that the crew would die out along the way or get
there and have no children to colonise. There would most likely be frozen
embryos both of humans and animals. Maybe there were and these will be
mentioned in the next book.
Still, it’s a good, exciting story that’s well worth a read
and I’m looking forward to the next volume. I think this is the best of the
three books I got in my goody bag late last year.
2 comments:
I've seen this one in the book stores and have been curious about it. Sounds like a good one amongst a lot of so so YA. I don't know anything about physics so I probably won't have the same issues as you did.
I'm not a physics expert, I just know a few things because I love space and spaceflight. But it's a good book, well worth a read.The positives far outnumber the negatives.
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